Talk:Synergism

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Editing the flow

I took the liberty of reverting Jordan's last edit. The flow seemed better before. First, the general meaning (may need tweaking). Second, relating the word to the theological use and salvation. Thirdly, a definition specifically in terms of regeneration. Gomarus 14:11, 24 January 2006 (EST)

I changed the format because the quote at the end appeared more as a definition and so I thought it should go at the beginning rather than the end. However, I do recognize that it somewhat flows with the salvation section. It just sounded odd to me to read the definition, go to its relation to salvation, and then read another definition at the end. JordanBarrett (talk) 14:13, 24 January 2006 (EST)

Do you also think we should leave out any section titles? JordanBarrett (talk) 14:14, 24 January 2006 (EST)

I tried to simplify and remove double defining (see bold above). As it stands, there is not yet enough content for a section title. Gomarus 14:23, 24 January 2006 (EST)

I like what you did. Nice job. JordanBarrett (talk) 15:42, 24 January 2006 (EST)